Category: Writers Block
When I think of you, you call me, as if you could hear my thoughts
When I reach for you in the loneliness there you are to stop the dark.
No one knows the inside of me, like you do..
They didn't see the tears past the painted smile.
No one else could read the story written deep inside my heart.
You, you made the difference in my grey skies and turned them blue
You, you heard my music then wrote the lyrics to my tune.
You, you captured the stars for me and returned the sparkle to my eyes.
My day dream now are filled with happier times.
Within my heart forever you shall reside.
Maria, I like it. Nice work.
Oh I aggree really nice!!
this is so so so beautiful
It's sweet, yes.
Whatever the thought or expression was or is you have seemed to grasp. There is a nack or ability in you're poetry, that makes you able to capture the moment and bring it to life in its fullness.
As for the poem, the line, regarding the star, made me think what is it, twinkel twinkel in the eye?
Seriously, its well writen, wonderful and like a painting, where you are able to see everything, but threw the painters eyes.
again nice and
thumbs up.
winks at devious.
Agreed.